1. You have some really good insights here, especially about the how the family may be trying to "trap" hope within their attic. I'd never thought of that before. (Ben Webster's Wild Duck Journal 3)
2. I saw the blindness connection between these books pretty early on, but I never really thought of how Hedvig's blindness could have led to the truth about her father. Good job! (Kyla Padbury's Wild Duck Journal 1)
3. I wouldn't necessarily disagree with what you are saying, but I'm not really sure if the narrator in The Wild Duck uses metaphors or similes. It seems to me that he/she just gives stage directions. And I'm not sure if this is third person omniscient, because we can't hear the characters' thoughts. (Ivan Kalliveg's Wild Duck Journal 2)
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